Good Morning
For project two, I decided to create the sounds that I hear in my house in the morning. The audio begins as I am taking a sip of water, which I do every morning as I am taking my medication. The rest of the audio are the sounds of walking around my house, getting ready in the morning. I tried to incorporate the noises from my surroundings, such as the washing machine, squeaky floors, construction, garbage trucks, light switches, and birds chirping. This was the first time I had ever used audio in my art as well as the first time I used Adobe Audition. I tried to overlap the audio in creative ways as well as alter the direction the sound was coming from. I used the Stereo Pan tool to indicate the direction of the sound. I enjoyed this project and look forward to using Adobe Audition in the future.
critique notes
andrea arroyo
I liked the start of the audio because the background noise tied all of the additional sounds together. The transition with the beeping sounds was successful because it created variation in the audio. I would suggest removing the background noise or using more than once instead of using the same audio throughout the entire recording.
conner stefan kramer
I liked the simplicity of your project at the beginning. I really liked how you included a phone ringing. I would suggest adding more effects to the audio. The piece sounds slightly random and I did not get the impression that the audio was supposed to be noises from walking through a park. I thought the audio was intended to sound like it was indoors, especially because of the zoom call audio.
lauryn crittenden
I liked how she incorporated such a wide range of sounds. However, it was hard to understand the theme because there was such a large variety. Regardless, I really liked the range of sounds because it creates an interesting composition.
leah marie schultz
I really enjoyed the loud volume for the sizzling noises and the knife sounds. I liked how loud the project was overall. A lot of the sounds you included were related to eating or drinking which was well organized. I would recommend adding smoother transitions.
vance wood
I liked how she incorporated a variety of background sounds. I would suggest making the transitions between the sounds a little smoother for a more fluid piece. I did not realize the audio was intended to sound like an airport because the bong rip did not seem like it would occur in an airport.
zackery brown
I like the incorporation of the underwater sounds. My favorite part is how the door opening woke up the baby. The only thing I could suggest would be to add a variety of volume.
sydney hewitt
I found some of the effects and volumes to be slightly overwhelming, but I really enjoyed the intensity of your piece. I liked the range in volumes and effects. You did a great job overlapping different pieces. The only thing I would suggest would be to create smoother transitions.
benjamin david cramer
I would suggest making the piece less repetitive because it sounds more like a song than of real life. I thought you did a great job editing the audio and creating a beat.
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